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Phoebe: of course. *smiles and gives you a brief friendly hug* Lucien: *points at himself*, "Me?" Sterling: why not I guess... Sunny: *only if they look like they really need one, and are one ...

Personally I would chose to explain injuries in the way they move, since it will likely be impacted. talk about how they limp or hold their breath when they walk, and definitely talk about where t...

Ok, in that case I like it so far. In terms of expanding, the first speaking part might do well with an introduction or something, maybe like a "hello", or sound like a laugh or sigh to set the mood?

ok, first of all, I don't know how long you are planning on making this, and without much of the context im not really sure what is going on. That being said I think the idea could be good, but, (...

Some, as in a a little less than half.

I tried this a few years ago, my neighbor and I were going to write a book, except it didn't really work out, probably because I sucked at the actual writing part. anyways, has anyone actually don...

"This, is a piece of wood, and when you put it next to this other piece of wood, *dramatic pause*, nothing happens..."

thief tries to make amends by testing a new technology but accidentally summons a being from alternate universe, which the ship containing humanity's only hope proceeds to get stuck with and they h...

First of all, thank you so so much for taking the time to write all of that out. I’ll be sure to look over it and apply the stuff you wrote. I agree with the stuff about the wording. Also in c...

I still need to do some editing and make it, well, better, but here it is! Thank you so much if you end up reading the whole thing. Untitled as of now. Despite a few dusty old lamps, the...