Hannah

Those are some really good points. Thank you for your feedback, this will definitely help make it more realistic and interesting!

No problem! Good luck

Thank you, that's helpful :) With your story I don't think this is cliche, but I haven't watched/read anything about hell/satan; for example the show Lucifer, so I don't know what all is done in th...

Thank you! This helps me a lot :)

Thank you!! This will definitely help me, those are very good questions to build off of :)

So these will be short descriptions, but I'm wondering if these characters are too stereotypical? This is the main character and her friend group. Thanks! Bea (main): has social anxiety at beginni...

So my government type is Autocracy, where there's one person with absolute power. It's like a monarchy but it's not always through family. Anyways, I was wondering if this has been done too much, i...

So I want to start writing a book and my idea so far is head vs heart. So basically there are people who can control emotions and there are people who can control thoughts, and they're at war. It's...

So I want to start writing a book and my idea so far is head vs heart. So basically there are people who can control emotions and there are people who can control thoughts, and they're at war. It's...

"Okay..." Ivory continued walking down the path to dwarve's house (should we have a school where everybody goes so we can meet again)