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(If you use proper punctuation at all times, commas, periods, etc. then you seem less like a six year old and more like someone who knows what their doing. I mean this with no offense)
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(no no I know I don't use proper punctuations sorry I know how to it's just I don't use them I will be better at it sorry about it)
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(It’s okay no need to apologize. I just noticed that your characters all seem like children when you don’t use punctuation.)
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A giggle came from the ceiling. There was a girl. She looked about 14-15 and was sitting on the ceiling. She had freakishly long light gray hair that covered her eyes and long grey robes that covered almost every inch of her body. The robe sleeves flopped over her hands. "You are a bunch of misfits, aren't you?" She asked chuckling, holding a hand over her mouth.
"Um…Yes, I guess so," Lulu says nervously
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She turned her head towards Lulu. "Ahh! A demon!" She mused hoping off the 'ceiling' and onto the floor. She started to walk over to Lulu.
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Zack glanced up from his pretzel with a snicker. "You're curious of just one Demon? Well, there's two, you know," The man said sassily from his little area away fom the others.
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(I meant for it to be like a curious thing and not scared. Sorry if that confused you!)
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(oh lol I can fix it.)
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Her head snapped over to the other demon. "I know! But your not scared like this one." She said pointing at Lulu. "Fear is such a weird thing, isn't it?"
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"Fear makes you do stupid shit, that's for sure," Zack sighed, biting into the pretzel again.
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Madi grimaced slightly as Zack spoke.
“Oh. Your one of those characters. Huh.” She went back to her book.
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"What the hell do you mean by that?" He asked, sounding exasperated. She's probably one of those know-it-all characters.
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“You cuss.” Madi says this without looking up from her book.
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"And?" He rolled his eyes, tucking his legs into his chest. "I don't think I, out of all species of race on the planet, would care."
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She cocked her head to the side slightly. "Those?" She asked.
"What" Lulu asked in confusion
"Um I may be a demon, but I don't have powers," Lulu said nervously.
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Her head snapped back to Lulu. "That even better!" She said, getting way to close to Lulu. Their faces were inches apart. "Do you have a names?" She asked. She seemed to stare into your soul even though you can't see her eyes.
"Um, yes my name is Lulu, and can you please move back," Lulu said uncomfortably
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She stared at her for a bit longer before backing up slightly. "So polite!~" She chuckled and flopped onto the floor.
"Um, are you ok, and why do you think I'm so cool. All I am is a twitchy demon" Lulu says looking at her twitching arm.
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She chuckled from the floor. "Cool? I'm sorry to disappoint but I don't think your cool. You're another demon. You're nothing new to me. It's just fun to mess with people." She explained.
"Oh….ok then," Lulu says disappointedly. "and to think you thought somebody thought of you more than just the twitchy demon girl," Lulu mumbles to herself and she grabs her arm to stop the twitching.
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The girl on the floor began to laugh harder. "Oh your much more than a twitchy demon!" She said sitting up. "Do you have a symbol?" She asked.
"A symbol…Oh, you mean like this." Lulu says while showing a black marking of a heart that was on her neck.
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She chuckled and nodded. "How were you…'born'?" She asked waving her hand.
"I don't know I have no past memories," Lulu says looking ashamed of herself.
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The girl smirked. "Look. I know your universe may not be like mine but is it possible that you were created and not born?" She asked.
"Maybe that's why I have no past memories," Lulu wondered. "OW" Lulu yelled as her arm started twitching really bad.