"We need to be quiet now," Vixenkit whispered. Looking up at a tree, she realized she'd be able to see the camp and tell if anything could help them figure out where to go next. "Hold on…" She leaped at the trunk and with difficulty, clambered up the trunk and out onto a branch.
She stared into what used to be ShadowClan camp and took in as much as she could before dropping back down.
(Letting her see things is good cause she's pretty much got a photographic memory)
"Yeah, I do." Vixenkit hissed, the fur on her neck standing on end. "What is it?"
"What does it sound like-?" Vixenkit said, her voice suddenly quiet.
(What will happen with Silverpaw, Shadowclaw, and Swiftstar ?)
Mistkit stared at the bushes in silence, waiting for something to happen, but the only change was the noise growing louder, as if whatever was making it was coming closer. She tensed as the leaves began to rustle.
Silverpaw thought about the things Shadepaw had said to her at the Gathering, but she was pulled from her thoughts as Swiftstar's voice rang out through the camp. The apprentices and warriors gathered to listen to what she had to say.
(Shadepaw was flirting with her. He's two moons older by the way.)
Flamekit was still staring at the she-cat. Who is she… He thought out loud, eventually pumping into a long and falling. He jolted to his feet, "I'm alright…" He looked back at the group. He had missed something. The group of kits was talking about something while he zoned out and was thinking. He caught up to them and asked, "What's going on? What did I miss?" He said, confused.
(Are they downwind or upwind?)
(Hmm… Depends on if they want to get caught, or catch it)
(I meant of the patrol)
(Oh, they can smell the patrol, I can't remember which one that is)
(Downwind.)
Mistkit turned to Flamekit and whispered, "Listen. You hear that?" She looked back at the shadow cat, "It's coming from that cat."
"Is it a kittypet?" Vixenkit said about the jingling cat, she wrinkled her nose. She'd been told that kittypets often had noisy collars.
Flamekit's ears shifted to the side. He heard a branch brake. He looked in the bush and saw a tail. "Huh…" He said, backing up. "Who are you?… What do you want…?" He asked. The cat had brown fur. He looked to be as old as Shadowclaw. Maby a moon more. The tom looked at him, ignored him, and ran off. It had a color, so most definitely a kittypet. It didn't have a loud color but it had a sea blue collar.
Mistkit glanced at the other three kits. "Well..come on!" She mewed, "Let's go!" She ran off, following the sound.
(It's Ciel, right?)
(Ciel is grey)
(No, the jingle one.)
(It could be)
(i drew a kind of poster with most of the characters but I don't like it that much so I probably won't finish it)
(PS what would this story be called if it was a warriors story?)
(Also can I change the thunderclan leader's name? I don't like that the prefix is the same as windclans medicine cat)
(also I need ages for springheart, shadowclaw, dewpaw and silverpaw (I'm making allegiances and this thing needs ages))
(Shadowclaw is about 10 moons.)
(Dewpaw and Silverpaw are seven moons, which makes Shadepaw nine moons, since he's two moons older than them. And you can change the ThunderClan leader's name if you want to.)
