I kinda been inactive here, mostly out of laziness and looking back at my characters' profile, they're really bland, I got better at the Looks category, well thanks to Wattpad tutorials
but I have some trouble with the history and some parts Nature section
First with the nature section
I have some problem with describing some traits and sometimes it comes off a bit bland, I switched to the list format, which imo helped it looked more organized and helped me get it down better than in paragraph form
but at the same time, I get stuff that resembles textbook definitions
Then there are the mannerisms, which I just hate, I hate being critiqued on it, I hate writing them, they're kinda pointless, I kinda think this stuff should be shown in the book/or whatever brand of media and I know why it exists but still I find it annoying
And now my worst offender is my history section most of my characters backstory range from really short paragraphs and really long word walls, they're hard to write and they're even boring to write, here's an example, https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/741775#nature_panel
So have any tips