Can someone tell me if the tension between my main romantic pairing is realistic when they first meet please

check out my universe first for a summary of the plot

then message me and i'll send u the very first scene where they meet, it's like in the second half of the very first chapter

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shit man thanks

@WaffleWizard ok i fixed it

I read your description, sounds like an interesting story. I would like to read your scene, but in going to bed soon and might not be able to until tomorrow.

thank you and alright, message me and i'll send it to you