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Character critique

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@Ok_Kaii group

Hi, please critique my character, Ravi! I will also critique other characters so send em my way. Ravi Hale

@penguibunny

You have to open the character or universe to public

@penguibunny

Or public when the other person has the url

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@Ok_Kaii group

Ah, thank you!

@WriteOutofTime

His character design is so AWESOME!!! Is that your art??? It's fantastic. I'm a Leo, too! (August 2).

I really, really like this character. Everything's great, but I have just a few questions. First, what are his insecurities? Why does he have them? You say he's overcompensating, but you don't quite say what it is he's overcompensating for. I'd also like to know a bit more about his background. It's a little short.

Otherwise, wow! I adore this character. Great job!

If you want, you can critique my character Daso because he kinda reminds me of your character. I think they'd be friends, lol. Daso