If it's not too much trouble, I'd like critiques on any or all of these beans <3 anything is appreciated
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Well, when it says that Thai's motivated by freedom, you could go a little more in-depth with that. Freedom could mean less pressure on her, or less protection, or being able to move around freely. And where it says she's athletic, is she more of a gymnast or a 'bodybuilder' type?