Can you critique my character Liam for me?
thanks!
@SunGod Bruh, Boss is a boss :0
For his height, could we get an exact measurement? I love the height comparisons and I think u should keep those, but I would recommend adding an exact height as well- Same deal with the weight 👍
Okie I so when u say "The demons were very mocking of this, but he doesn't mind. It meant that everyone sort of forgot about his problems once he stopped talking about them, aside from his friends, and he was able to largely carry on as normal." it feels like an incomplete explanation. Why didn't he mind? Doesn't he want the demons to stop talking to him? Why would he just let everybody forget about his problems? Maybe he just wants to be treated normal, but does this mean that being treated like a normal person is more important to him than silencing the demons? Maybe he just doesn't care tho, lol
In talents, "stopping arguments" doesn't seem to align very smoothly with his bold personality, but I suppose I could see it working with the darker side of his personality, like when he's alone with the demons.
This one is more of a suggestion than a critique: I'd like to know more about his outside image, like what people outside his friend group thing of him- And how does this affect him, like is he self-conscious about what other people think of him, or does he give no craps?
lol I actually laughed about his favorite weapon
Okay, wow- other than that, I'd say he's solid! He's a very dynamic character and his personality is pretty sound. I feel like his behavior and personality are logical when compared to the struggles he goes through, and he was very interesting! Great job!
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Hey, could you critique Zenith? Zenith Zander Zagami
And maybe some of my other characters if you have the time? If you can't, that's fine.
@SunGod Bruh, Boss is a boss :0
For his height, could we get an exact measurement? I love the height comparisons and I think u should keep those, but I would recommend adding an exact height as well- Same deal with the weight 👍
Okie I so when u say "The demons were very mocking of this, but he doesn't mind. It meant that everyone sort of forgot about his problems once he stopped talking about them, aside from his friends, and he was able to largely carry on as normal." it feels like an incomplete explanation. Why didn't he mind? Doesn't he want the demons to stop talking to him? Why would he just let everybody forget about his problems? Maybe he just wants to be treated normal, but does this mean that being treated like a normal person is more important to him than silencing the demons? Maybe he just doesn't care tho, lol
In talents, "stopping arguments" doesn't seem to align very smoothly with his bold personality, but I suppose I could see it working with the darker side of his personality, like when he's alone with the demons.
This one is more of a suggestion than a critique: I'd like to know more about his outside image, like what people outside his friend group thing of him- And how does this affect him, like is he self-conscious about what other people think of him, or does he give no craps?
lol I actually laughed about his favorite weapon
Okay, wow- other than that, I'd say he's solid! He's a very dynamic character and his personality is pretty sound. I feel like his behavior and personality are logical when compared to the struggles he goes through, and he was very interesting! Great job!
Aaahhhhh tysm!!! I'm really glad you think he's well-developed :D He's so fun to work on, I love him to bits xDD
And thank-you so much for your critiques and suggestions, I'll definitely be filling him out more based on those ^^ I appreciate it a lot!
hey can you critique my lady? She's kind of my switcheroo "bad to good" character but… not?… idk tell me what you think!
Please be as harsh as you want and if you have any questions I'll be happy to answer!
Can you critique my character Liam for me?
thanks!
I'd love to critique Liam (I have a boyo named Liam, too uwu) but his privacy settings won't let me view his profile :0
His page should be public now. Sorry about that. Invalid Character