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Could I get some feedback?

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LaJollaRising

My characters are roughly complete, but I need some help refining them. There's obviously going to be things I can make better, so if you can give some critiques of what you see, that would be great!

Thanks!

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@Riorlyne pets

Start by making those pages public, that way we can view them. :)

LaJollaRising

I'm new to the site, and still getting used to it, so how would I make them public?

pets
@Riorlyne pets

At the top of your character page next to the red edit button you’ll see a round white button with a sort of triangle in it, that will open up a page where you can set the character page’s privacy settings.

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@Riorlyne pets
LaJollaRising

They should be public now, but my computer's a bit finicky.