Critique for critique?

I'll critique your character if you'll critique Alice

Please make sure you link the page and make sure that they are public

Alice looks really good! The only thing I can think of is translating the Greek into English as well so we know what it means. Perhaps how to pronounce the Greek as well

Thanks :)
I might add some sort of translation. Is there anyone you want me to critique for you?

Oooh, i really like her :0 she's very detailed and well written (also, her backstory is quite interesting :')) ). I cant seem to find anything wrong with her so good job! o3o
As for me, would u mind taking a look at one of these 2 bois? (you can pick one or both, doesn't matter)
Rin —> Rynn
Avatar –> Tierlan

Oooh, i really like her :0 she's very detailed and well written (also, her backstory is quite interesting :')) ). I cant seem to find anything wrong with her so good job! o3o
As for me, would u mind taking a look at one of these 2 bois? (you can pick one or both, doesn't matter)
Rin —> Rynn
Avatar –> Tierlan

There's not really anything I can find wrong or out of place with either of these characters. Rin's a little emotionless but I guess he's supposed to be that way. Keep up the good work and I really love you're art style :))