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Critique My Character

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barabara

Feedback for my character

barabara

Please help me critique my character, Virago; Rie Katayama

@WriteOutofTime

I…I can't find anything wrong with her character. She's so amazing. Um…maybe add more backstory? I. I don't know. I'm usually way better at critiquing characters but I genuinely think this character doesn't need much work. Her flaws and personality match well with each other, her motivations are great, her mannerisms are cool. It seriously seems like you're describing a real person. Great job!

barabara

Thank you so much for the help!