This is my child Lucas,
Please be honest with your critique and don't feel bad with what you say.
Thank you!!
Critique my Character!
Okay! Here are the things I noticed:
- 132lbs isn't overweight for a 5'5 male, the ideal weight would be from 122 to 150 lbs.
- Does he just let his hair hang loose?
- Does he have any other motivations or goals besides staying alive? Like maybe, doing something long term with his art? Or maybe there's something he really wants to do, like see the Grand Canyon or live in Japan someday, and so he prepares or those dreams (by getting books about them, writing papers for school, learning the language, whatever)?
- I LOVE NACHOS
That's all I can really think of! You did a good job with him.
@Masterkey
Thank you for your critique!!