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Critique my character

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Here's my character

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Please Critique it

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I don't really critique characters often, but I know a thread for good character critiques. You should check it out.

https://www.notebook.ai/forum/characters-board/open-again-i-m-in-the-mood-to-critique-people-s-characters-drop-them-off-if-you-want

@PatchesForever011

This is my first time doing anything like this- But i think it's pretty good. Maybe try to explain a bit more of how she got into that situation. Scarlet wants revenge, what did Allison do? Just a bit more background, otherwise is gud

@pumpkin

hey