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Hi, can anyone critique my character? I'm v new to writng so I'd love the help! Thanksss
Critique my character, please!
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person_off
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Invalid Character here's the link, i forgot it before
I would suggest making her a bit taller, just because 5'6" is a little on the lower end of the "tall" description
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@Mindful_Bison thanks, i think you're right!