https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/576400- This is one of my older characters Beau. I'm just looking at making him better
Critique my character plz?
Sorry I didn't see this for so long!
Okay, so I've just got a few questions:
- Why is he either too trusting or not trusting enough?
- Why, specifically, does he want to be normal? Is his life unsatisfying in some way that he feels could be rectified if he wasn't a Neo-Human?
- Why is his trust hard to get back when it's broken?
I really like his character, I just was wondering about his personality and where certain components of it came from. Hope I helped somewhat.
Some details you gotta save for the story in my opinion. But for 2. Being a Neo-Human for him is being a ticking time bomb that could go off anytime he isn't careful, anytime he isn't watching his back and isn't prepared.