Critique my characters, and i may draw yours.

i have a few characters that i would love to have a second view. i think they are good, but the fact i created them feels biased. they also are not complete so suggestions would be wonderful. if you want me to draw a character afterwords i would be more than happy to.

( also names. i want some that are fantasy, related to the creature they are, but also modern. help would be great.

I would love to help! can you post a link?
also, i usually do crits as just a list of questions and opinions. is that alright?

that would be amazing, let me finish up one last thing then i can put the link.

It is on private.