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Critique My Characters, please

@shattered_heart forum 2 comments schedule
@shattered_heart

I just want to ensure my characters are interesting. So tell me what needs to be added and if they are characters whose stories you would like to know.
I feel like my main character might be a male mary sue. And that the princess might be annoying, but Ill leave that to you guys. For now, here is the antagonist.

@Kinarymo

To be honest, he looks pretty alright to me, nothing much to comment about. I kinda like his backstory, his reasons are justified, overall, i understand him and i can even relate on a certain level. He's a good, quite interesting character and i would like to know more about him, (i find a character's descent into madness really interesting)