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Critique my Dyslexic Boi?

@LilNerdyGingerKitsune forum 5 comments schedule

Just finished my secondary main character! Any feedback would be great! Don't be afraid to let him have it!!

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I love him, and I really don't have any critiques to give. Your story sounds really interesting, and Caleb seems to be very well-rounded and well-thought-out.

@Becfromthedead
Aww thank you!

@castcool

oops I've become obsessed

@castcool Obsessed?? With… Caleb? If that's what you mean I'm honored! ^◡^