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@Starfast Dance & Cry 32 comments April 12, 2021

"Do you ever think before you speak, or do you know how ridiculous you sound but choose to say it anyways?” (he/him)

This dude definitely seems to be the one who speaks his mind. He's not afraid to give his opinion when he feels it's necessary. He also kinda seems like he'd be the kind of guy to give advice discreetly, by telling them what they're doing wrong, but off-handing it by explaining those flaws through insults, if that makes any sense.

"Can't you just let go of the past?! You're just gonna be dead weight if you keep acting up like this!" [Character] screamed at [Other Character], heavy tears flowing down her face. "You act like we don't exist, but when we're in risk of dying, you suddenly show up and play the hero! Like, what the actual fuck?!" [She/her]

They've got trauma & trust issues. I love how this kinda looks like something that I'd write, which makes me think we have similar writing styles and that's cool, but I really want to give them a hug. They seem like they really care about people, especially the person that they're talking to, who most likely wronged them immensely. I hope they get the respect they clearly deserve.

(TW // death mention)
“Listen to me well, darling. When your boyfriend gets himself out of the water, I want you to make yourself some sort of very sharp and very painful weapon and murder him. And make it hurt. But of course, that could still be too nice. So I’ll make it worse for you: you’ll stay completely conscious of your actions. You’ll know that I’m forcing you to kill your precious Jack, and you won’t be able to stop until he’s dead.” [she/they]