Hey! I'll give you an honest review on your characters, and probably offer some suggestions to help flesh them out. I'll be gentle but firm, promise. If you don't agree, that's completely fair, and you might get a better opinion elsewhere, hah!
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Would you please critique this girl? She needs it.
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Could you critique Azura please? She is fairly new, so she needs it, bad lol
Mason needs this……….. Badly