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@NathanU

Keeps a photo of his mom on his person at all times. Has nightmares. Often tells beaten foes that he'll make it quicker than they deserve.

Insatiably curious. Goes through a lot of protective gloves; nonetheless has scarred hands, perpetually greasy nails, and a faint lingering scent of CLP.

Punster, punster, punster.

Deliberately makes herself look as different from her "original" as possible.

Affably Evil. Snappy dresser. Always has an alibi, the jerk.

Ambiguous motives. Somewhat amoral, but has lines that she will draw. Will go on a long nerdy rant if you express curiosity about what she does.

Got it right with Jay keeping a photo of his mom 👌
Tho he also has a brother (who got taken in by the cult) so he's in the photo too
…And Jay too, younger
It's a photo from the happier days TwT

As for Nuru, I do have in mind for her to get a facial plastic surgery (or something) in the story's resolution

As for Eva having her moral limits, I did once briefly think, "say, she's a baddie and sides with Clawe, but how about towards the end of the story he goes too far with the evilness (or backstabs Eva) and she's like "I'm done" and acts against him?"

also what's CLP >_>

Selcoeurl

also what's CLP >_>

It stands for "cleaner, lubricant, propellant." Basically: it's gun oil.

But while I'm sure one uses gun oil when building and fixing battlebots? I think what I had in mind was more along the lines of industrial lubricant. You know…too neutral to be called a "chemical reek," but definitely a "synthetic oil" smell.

@NathanU

It stands for "cleaner, lubricant, propellant." Basically: it's gun oil.

But while I'm sure one uses gun oil when building and fixing battlebots? I think what I had in mind was more along the lines of industrial lubricant. You know…too neutral to be called a "chemical reek," but definitely a "synthetic oil" smell.

Oh, ok

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Adisa: daddy issues (cuz he's dead), stoner, but best friends with the most popular girl in school (she/her)

Flora: most popular girl in school, or close to it. Filthy rich, african american, cheerleader, but has a dark side (she/her)

Uri: hopeless romantic, loner, fascinated by humans (he isn't one) brutally honest (he/they)

Selcoeurl

Adisa: daddy issues (cuz he's dead), stoner, but best friends with the most popular girl in school (she/her)

Prefers indica strains; only recently found out the difference. Was close to her father, but his sudden death left a conflict permanently unresolved between them. Ever so slightly envious of anyone with two parental figures. Gets weed money from Flora on occasion, always at Flora's urging.

Flora: most popular girl in school, or close to it. Filthy rich, african american, cheerleader, but has a dark side (she/her)

Compulsive exerciser and possibly orthorexic. Drinks below the legal age. Slips Adisa weed money on occasion, but has to talk her into taking it. Knows that some big fish at the country club are low-key racist; convinced that she wouldn't be believed. Self-destructive intrusive thoughts and the occasional revenge fantasy. Still manages to maintain golden-child façade via style and guile.

Uri: hopeless romantic, loner, fascinated by humans (he isn't one) brutally honest (he/they)

Doesn't really grasp informal speech. Spies on people out of curiosity.

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Adisa: daddy issues (cuz he's dead), stoner, but best friends with the most popular girl in school (she/her)

Prefers indica strains; only recently found out the difference. Was close to her father, but his sudden death left a conflict permanently unresolved between them. Ever so slightly envious of anyone with two parental figures. Gets weed money from Flora on occasion, always at Flora's urging.

Flora: most popular girl in school, or close to it. Filthy rich, african american, cheerleader, but has a dark side (she/her)

Compulsive exerciser and possibly orthorexic. Drinks below the legal age. Slips Adisa weed money on occasion, but has to talk her into taking it. Knows that some big fish at the country club are low-key racist; convinced that she wouldn't be believed. Self-destructive intrusive thoughts and the occasional revenge fantasy. Still manages to maintain golden-child façade via style and guile.

Uri: hopeless romantic, loner, fascinated by humans (he isn't one) brutally honest (he/they)

Doesn't really grasp informal speech. Spies on people out of curiosity.

This is terrifyingly accurate, my god. Adisa was very very close to her dad before he died. She's super jealous that Flora has both her parents still and voices that constantly. "Don't take them for granted" I never thought about the weed money thing, but now that you mention it, will be added in.

Flora exercises for "fun." Drinks a lot at parties with Adisa, they're both seniors in high school so yes, very illegal. I'll probably make her put money in Adisa's wallet when she's not looking. Definitely right with the dark thoughts thing, and her parents have NO idea.

I- Yes.

Selcoeurl

Okay:

Naomi: She/her. AKA "Ned." Disabled and severely traumatized military veteran. Bi disaster. Grumpy. Can either be your best friend, or wreck your day from a mile off.
CJ: He/him. Former Navy medic, prankster, likes to hide his trauma under humor. Also a bi disaster, and likes big dudes.
Brandee: She/her. Tiny. Irascible. Can repair or drive just about any vehicle. Has a zillion tattoos.
Kieron: He/him. Absolute unit of an aspiring strength athlete. Works event security as his day job. Eats like a bear preparing to hibernate and lifts like a freight elevator. Sweet and naïve.

Bringin' these dorks back.

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Hinata Hayashi: Hurt woman who has to fight for a government that caused her world to explode. Very sad, very powerful