Help me out and critique my girl Alice?
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duuuuude she's so cool!!
the only critiques i have are:
1) i have no idea what the spell names are, idk if that really matters but maybe you could put a translation and/or pronunciation
2) she's the child of an elven queen and a human woman. how did that work, genetically? but idk how elves work in your story so maybe you've already gotten that worked out
other than that, everything looks good and i love her
duuuuude she's so cool!!
the only critiques i have are:1) i have no idea what the spell names are, idk if that really matters but maybe you could put a translation and/or pronunciation
2) she's the child of an elven queen and a human woman. how did that work, genetically? but idk how elves work in your story so maybe you've already gotten that worked outother than that, everything looks good and i love her
thanks :)
i fixed up the background to make it all more clear and the spells don't really need to be pronounced because the casters don't chant the spells when casting.
thanks for the input