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HELP! Please vote on your fav 3 for my book (I can't decide lol)(criticism is also welcome)

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Please vote for your fav 3 (and preferably and mix of girls and boys)!
All of them are teenage/young adult and any fixes/changes in your top 3 or overall are also greatly appreciated.

  1. Aaron Trent, male: Invalid Character
  2. Daniel (Danny) Black, male: Invalid Character
  3. Michael Levi, male: Invalid Character
  4. Ryan Lee, male: Invalid Character
  5. Kira Amanda, female: Invalid Character
  6. Topaz Sarai, female: Invalid Character
  7. Zuri Beau, female: Invalid Character

(I know it's kind of a lot but that's part of me being indecisive. Sorry!)

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I vote Aaron, Kira, and Zuri ^^ I think they all could use quite a bit more fleshing out, but otherwise they're great so far! I would have chosen Topaz as the third person, by the way, except that some of her physical traits (eye color, hairstyle) matched Kira's too closely and might have made things more confusing for the reader. Hope that helps! :)

Thanks! I just needed some help bc I'm also biased and some have been more fleshed out than others ofc. I'll certainly take that into consideration! (By biased I mean Danny is my fav lol)

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Well if you'd rather add Danny as part of the group then you definitely should! He is pretty cool too XD Glad to help!

Well if Danny isn't right then he shall be cut from the part! The part is the three humans who follow a dragon (Saffron) to the mythical world btw. Also an RP ("Where did you think we went?" in Fantasy Tavern if you want there is a spot open)

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That's awesome! I'm probably too busy to add any more RPs to my list rn, but thanks for the offer! Sounds like a cool storyline!