Notebook.ai

Hey I just updated my fantasy boy. Would it be too much to ask for a critique on his backstory and character in general?

Caboose forum 2 comments schedule
Caboose

https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/890609#notes_panel - Hey here's an amazing link

Boo

To fit his character, I recommend making his hair shaggy and a little low on his neck. Instead of a classic pony tail, maybe have him tie it into a little 'knob' on the back of his neck.