@Ok_Kaii
Alright, starting with Blair.
Other than maybe mentioning why he likes the colour purple and croissants, and you might wanna actually describe his personality, although it is pretty clear from the rest of his description.
Camden.
Interesting name. Is it intentionally supposed to sound like Cameron Diaz?
Same idea as Blair, other than going into his personality more, I'd say your good.
I can critique characters
Dude thank you so much!! Will definitely work on the prejudice section.
(Also he's a character for a comic not a written story so I'm writing more of a script than anything but THANK YOU FOR YOUR FAITH AND INTEREST)
Thanks again! :-)
((Edit: I'm sorry to be back so soon, but if you have any time could I please give you another boy: Levi Satou If not that's totally fine!))
@Kaloobia
HOW DO YOU DO THIS????
Your characters are so beautifully thought out! I love them!
Anyway. Let me mention a few things.
Just things like the why behind stuff. Why does he like tigers, that sort of thing. Where did the clenching/un-clenching fist thing come from?
Other than that, he is a wonderful boy. I do love the bit about him never being cold. (I'm like that a lot of the time, it drives my friends insane.)
Also, THIS IS A COMIC IDEA!!?? (Pretty pretty please tell me if you ever get this published. I will own it and read it EVERY DAY.)
Hope I was marginally helpful! Your characters are amazing!
Aahhhh dude again thank you so much!!! That's definitely helpful don't worry :) I'll work it out.
((Also AGAIN THANK YOU FOR YOUR FAITH IN ME haha maybe in the far far future, when I have a job and when I've gone to art school and when I've actually STARTED the comic, I'll let you know ;) )) Thanks again! <3