I'll critique characters! I will hopefully respond quickly!

Anonymous author 34 comments February 27, 2019

@mizmystery April 03, 2019

Could you please look at this family trying to overthrow a government for me?

@MrBudD3r April 04, 2019

Can you look over my smol?

@tazu June 03, 2019

he's one of the main characters of my story, theres not much info but ill add more :)

@Jay-Marae-is-in-an-emotional-maze June 03, 2019

You could say this is my first fully formed character, and I want to make sure I'm getting the details of how she would act with age and her disorders. If you could give some pointers that would be great!