I'll (partly) Critique Your Character!!

If you link a character sheet, please make sure it's privacy is set to public.

If you want a partial critique then just link your character. I will not critique descriptions that're just copy+pasted. After linking your character, then name a category you want looked over. I will give you advice and help make sure that your character sheet is lined up and consistent.
Note: I will only being doing one category per character, that doesn't mean you can't link more than one.
Also note: I won't be holding back, and I'll possibly be mean, so if you can't handle that level of criticism then plz don't link your character sheet.

Hi! could you look at my girl's Nature category?
(Or, if you were looking for more specific than that, the personality part? I wasn't sure exactly what to give you)

Thanks!

Hi, this sounds fun! I'd love if you looked over these two:
Gabriel: Gabriel Brewer
Noah: Noah Araullo
I'm particularly interested in the Nature section, for both of them. I hope I didn't misunderstand, and thanks in advance for doing this!

Hey be as brutal as you want and can you look at her nature or backstory? Either one is fine by me, just choose the easiest one.