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I'm stuck on one of my new books major plot points...help????

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My story is about a girl, Tiger Princess Tiyanna of the Diamond Clan, agreeing to an arranged marriage with her enemy clan's leader Prince Ashur to stop their century-long war. Both Ashur and Tiyanna have tiger markings that allow them to shape-shift into tigers, but no one knows the extent of their capabilities. There's another love interest for Tiyanna, Eyedin, a close friend and a soldier. But that's as far as I've gotten and I'm very stuck. Suggestions, please? As wild and outrageous as you like but pls help me. :)

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Ideas for new characters and cool plot twists welcome too

Ooh, looks like a nice story! Hmm…I guess one plot twist could be that Tiyanna spends a lot of time with Prince Ashur, but Eyedin, although he's very loyal but very jealous, kills the prince. Because 1) he's the prince of the enemy clan and he was assigned to kill him anyway, 2) he feels he's a danger, and 3) he thinks Tiyanna belongs to him.
So then, of course, Tiyanna suffers a mix of both grief, confusion, and hatred. And then, as he had to marry the prince so she could be queen, she realizes that she has the right traits to become queen, and that she's independent. With a plan on how to rule her kindgom, he becomes queen, but falls in love later, and marries. The end.

This is just a suggestion. Anyway, I hope you overcome your writer's block (Ugh, I've been there)! :3

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Oh wow I had never even thought of that! Thanks so much! I may or may not use it but you really shed some light on what Eyedin potentially could do.

You're welcome and thank you! :)