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Let me critique your characters!

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@phoenixwing group

Pls

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Here is George, he may not be perfect because I try to work on him whenever I'm able to-Invalid Character

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@Tidermelon group

Aha… he’s a bit unconventional compared to the other characters on this thread, but would you like to try your hand at Monyi? He’s a member of a quadruped species, the Clikor, but they’re as intelligent and well-educated as any old biped. :)

@Ariavaana

Hello!

I was hoping to get some critique on two of my characters, Eilore and Araite! For some context, they are sister Goddesses who work on Earth and were created by The Goddess of Life. They have a brother named Nyaery, but his character profile isn't complete just yet (feel free to check it out tho :P). Also please note the magic system I use is called Kilotai! You don't have to read that section because its pretty lengthy and confusing, but if you would like to be my guest! Thanks a lot :D

The Goddess of Time, Eilore: Eilore

The Goddess of The Sun, Ariate: Araite

(Forgive me for spelling mistakes I tried my best <3)

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@sheabutter group

i'm here and i've dragged my typical gay hobgoblin along with me