need someone to give feedback?

@InfinityCry* 3 comments July 18, 2018

@InfinityCry* July 18, 2018

Feedback for character, story.

@Lavy-the-Nerdy-Sci-Fi-Birdy July 18, 2018

I can give character feedback if you want.

@Lonnie July 18, 2018

Me too