I would love some critiques on my baby and hopefully, they're not too bad. Thank you in advance!
Dakota: Dakota Darwin
Please Critique My Non-Binary Child
I'll take a look at them.
They look pretty good!
If they're human, why do they have pointed ears?
Their personality isn't a personalty so much as personality traits. Maybe check out MBTI (Myers Briggs Type Indicator)
Also, for mannerisms, maybe elaborate on what they do when mad, happy, sad, or when they aren't talking.
Otherwise, I think they're pretty good!
@That_Lavender_Owl_that's_into_Sci-Fi Thank you!
In that universe, all humans have pointed ears! The size and length very but they all have a point, Dakota just happened to have very large ears.
Oh, I had planned on doing that just never got around to it. I'll be sure to do it soon!
I added these mannerisms: "Uses acronyms for everything they can, Has to touch everything, Talks very loud"
Again, thanks!
No problem!