Please help me improve my character.

Deleted user 5 comments August 13, 2018

Deleted user August 13, 2018

Please help critique my character Malconis (Malconis Everbeth-Godel ). It would be a big help.

@Riorlyne August 13, 2018

You need to set the page to public so people can see that. You can do that via the three-connected-dots button next to the red edit button on your character's page.

@somanyfrickinoreos August 14, 2018

Please help critique my character named Hikaru Sakuraba. Hikaru Sakuraba

Deleted user August 14, 2018

@Riorlyne thanks for letting me know, its public now

Deleted user August 14, 2018

@somanyfrickinoreos
Under description you say scars, where are they on his body? Where did he get them from?
What are some of his insecurities?
What does highly educated entail? College? If so what degree did he earn?
I like that his favorite weapon is his wits and the art of him is really good!