rate my boy

he's good and i love him pls tell me what u think

(art is done by me btw)

awww I really like him what a well-rounded and interesting character.

ill admit I was kinda concerned with his overview since you mentioned him being gay twice. I was like I hope this kid has a personality outside just "gay". I was proven very wrong tbh. his flaws, motivations, prejudice, heck even his mannerisms are all gold. his personality, too.

I also love how detailed and fleshed out his backstory is. seriously a+ on that.

honestly idk how to critique him. he's so well thought out. good job!!

@Sarah ahh thank u sm!!! i was a little worried that i was getting too in my head and not really putting down what i meant to say about him, y'know??

yeahh i didn't really know where to put his sexuality since there interestingly isn't a spot for it.

I really like it! I want to see him in action on paper now!

(AHHH I LOVE YOUR ART!!! He looks fantastic and I'm sooooo happy to see someone posting their artwork on here!!)
Not only are you a fabulous artist, you're a fabulous writer too. His personality was very fleshed out and detailed, and also seemed pretty realistic :)
Add more about his relationships, I'm curious! (especially his relationship with a demon that lasted 7 hours, I would love to hear the story on that)
I tried really hard to think of something to critique but I couldn't think of anything. Keep up the great work!
Grace <3

i don't know if mentions even really work but

@Masterkey ahh ty! i'd like to write him a little something, but…motivation…yuck

@Grace<3 go sh u got me blushing thank u omg. i'll flesh out those relationships for sure!

You can definitely see the correlation between his personality and back story, which is important. He's a character I'd love to read about.
Also, is there any particular reason his favourite food is peaches?

@Corbin_B3 thank u!! i'm glad you saw the correlation bc i was worrying about it a little

there wasn't really a particular reason, no. i can't even decide what my favorite food is so i just kind of picked something that i thought went with his whole "vibe" or whatever

An interesting boy. 9 outta 10.

@@Avagato aaaaa thnx u!!!!

@Luminaut-E thnx u sm!!!!