rating your characters averagely because I'm bored (thank you for participating!)

My apologies, I’m not completely familiar with how to link things in text, so I’ll just give you the link: Shade

Shade’s a bit different than all of the previous ones here, since she’s actually an animal character rather than a human — the orizore are a highly intelligent mountainous species on the planet Reesflon capable of rational thought and sentience. They have fur and wings and are usually black or a shade of gray, with brightly colored purple or red stripes, since their prey can only see in the yellow/blue spectrum. They usually have one horn, maybe two aligned vertically, which they use to spear their prey since they would hurt their paws if they used those. The orizore have thick skulls to compensate for head damage and long tails and strong hind legs to compensate for this extra weight. (Orizore don’t have last names, since they don’t really have technology or anything like that. They’re a simple people.)

Also, she’s primarily used in roleplays, so her profile is missing details on purpose to prevent my friends (who have accounts on here and read my stuff) from seeing spoilers. I assure you, she has some really interesting things in her Private Notes.

thanks for the info, I'll keep that in mind! now, let's get to the rating

Overview - 95/100
what's Kekeron? sounds spiky
nothing to comment on here, I'm going further

Looks - 97/100
💜she smol💜
Captured? I hope that you'll explain what does it mean later.
I want to immerge into her fur so badly (even though I physically wouldn't be able to)
HEART-SHAPED PAWPADS. SHE WINS MY HEART
flower crowns I am in love
ok so Kekeron's nothing good I assume
photosynthesis? that was unexpected
what is psycho-empathy?

Nature - 92/100
she is too pure, protect her at all costs
insert that one meme with a red shirt guy saying why are you so cute
her name is Shade and she has an uncle named Dark, that's adorable! does she have any more relatives?
if she can fly well for an orizore her age, what is the average age at which orizore can fly as well?
is Sky a name or did you mean sky as the blue thing floating threateningly above us
can I adopt her
there's good balance in her "Nature" section, you've written her well, so be proud!

History - 84/100
"pulled out of Kekeron into a portal of fire by a strange lion." wow that's a roller coaster
an orphan hero… what a miserable world we live in.
lions and fedoras. I sense an interesting case.
alright then keep your secrets
oh so Captured is a roleplay. now everything's clear

Social - 76/100
I like those simple names!
I don't think that this Kekeron collar should be mentioned in her favorite possesion, just write that she doesn't have one
chooi birds sound very chonky, I want to see them

Family - 80/100
I wonder if her parents also had darkness-related names
I may or may not check out Sound's page. that depends on my time. I'll write it down to remember

Shade is such a cute and innocent character, I love her with all my heart! if she's so well-described in her public fields, I can't imagine what developments you've got in her private notes! I hope that by roleplaying with her more, you'll se her grow and bloom like a beautiful flower.
average - 87/100

Shade is:
89% likely to be my friend
67% likely to by my lover
96% likely to be my party member
54% likely to be my enemy

This right here is my girl Piper

She's one main character of six but I guess you could say she's the leader of the group in a sense? But not really but also kind of, idk it's hard to explain without giving away major story details

I get that you're probably really overwhelmed with everyone else's characters so feel free to leave her for last lol, like oh my god that's a lot-
You're very good at this!

info understood and noted. and also thank you! I didn't think I'd be good at something I intended to do mediocrely °•°

Overview - 75/100
I like the name Piper and I do not know why. I thought that I'll share that with you.
it's good that you stated "at the moment", this means that you are still working on her.

Looks - 73/100
I wonder how important is the fact that she keeps her hair down that it had to be compared to her cousin's hair
sees a question mark okay the sermon begins: I don't want to see any question marks. are you asking me? I don't know this information. you have to tell me this. I won't know this by myself, and if you tell me that you're not sure, I won't be sure, too. I don't like to wander in a thick fog. I want to see things clear. don't show anyone that you are uncertain about something that you have full control over. don't be afraid to make mistakes.

Nature - 38/100
oh. we gotta work on that.
after quick skimming I'll just assume that this section isn't finished, so I'll try to help you develop it more.
firstly, her personality type. I don't think tired is a trait. the best way to uncover a character's personality is to fill some questionnaries. you can find plenty of those on the internet. you can also try talking "face to face" - find some free time in your day. imagine that you are talking with your character. just lead the conversation like you're talking with a friend. you can also imagine them reacting to a certain event, situation, and then take notes of their actions. I'm sure that with some time you'll get what I mean and coming up with characters' personalities won't be a challenge anymore.
question mark senses active
it's harder to come up with adequate conditions, especially mental illnesses and disorders. to determine those, it's best to write down a character's story. do they have any traumas? how were they raised? by whom? have there been any small events that carried a bigger impact in their future? one's backstory tells everything. and if you can't come up with a backstory before you determine the nature of a character, do your best to form it so their traits result from it.
there's more written in the "Mannerisms", so that's better. the only thing that bugs me is the Irish accent, I think it should have been in some other place.
other fields are also underdeveloped, but they have a good start. as I said before, have a conversation with Piper. let her tell you about everything she's been through, and then write it. if you are done, you can always let me know, and I'll check her, if you want.

Social - 78/100
"school" tells too many jobs. if she's a student, write that. "she's a student" tells more precise information.
question mark
I like that you let others know that you are still working on her, that means she's still growing to become the best!

History - 82/100
may all the parents who died in a fire whose children were somehow saved have a decent afterlife.
is it known what caused the fire?
but I want to know who Scarlet is
oh they're that dude who lives in people's heads
wait wait wait where did Grace come from?
I see that you have a rough sketch of her backstory ready. that will allow you to define her personality easier. remember my advices.

from what I've read, I compare Piper to a caterpillar. cute and wiggly, but that's not her true form. she only has to spend some time in her cocoon, answering your questions, and after your conversation, she'll come out as a stunning butterfly, ready to fly and bedeck the flowery meadows. my final words: don't stop working on her and good luck on that!
average - 69/100

Piper is:
56% likely to be my friend
21% likely to by my lover
62% likely to be my party member
39% likely to be my enemy

(I'd like to say that I'm glad that you all enjoy my ratings! your comments make me happy ^-^)

Okay thank you so much for doing Sparrow for me!!! :D! I'm so glad you love her as much as I do!!

Do you think you could do Thad now?? Thaddeus Godchallenger

Thaddeus the God Challenger. the Teacher. the Man. you better look after Sparrow like she's your own daughter, or else I'll be forced to break into your home and scream out a sermon through my tears and call the police in a polite and good manner

Overview - 85/100
aces, unite!
looks at age MR. THADDEUS.

Looks - 89/100
New Human? what's the difference from a regular human
is now smart and calculates pounds and feet yes, I see more, I see clearer.
m a j e s t i c
"he crash-landed on New Earth." o h
again, I appreciate the separate fields for face features.

Nature - 99/100
like with Sparrow, these mannerisms layouts are perfect
"Take down the King God", you go, Thad, you go. sudden realization MR. THAD
"Hitting random things with his staff" what a fascinating hobby, I'd like to do that too. too bad that I don't have a staff
those clear descriptions, they blow me away

Personality - 89/100
am I favoring your characters? yes, yes I am.
dances giddily Mr. Thad, you old man, I hope you'll see yourself someday as you were once before. you will see a brighter future, for you and for your world. (or not. I've no idea what your creator is planning to do to you.)
my mood is too funny to rate him rationally whoops. why am I so happy today again?

Voice - 78/100
ooh the voice I fear the most. scary.

Social - 88/100
venison… and BLACKBERRIES? I hope he doesn't eat them at once. (tomat, let people enjoy things)
"both the taste and the look of them" ah, the one true love
my stick by bad lip reading starts playing in the background
HE LIVES IN A TREE HE LIVES IN A TREE

History - 98/100
the origins of the Godchallenger… MR. Godchallenger
why is the King God so not nice
oh so he got shot to Earth that explains the crash-landing
wait w i N G S !?
and here the story begins. beautiful. I'd read this.

Abilities/powers - 100/100
aaaaahhhh so that's where the wings came from. now I can see, so clear, so undisturbed
I understand the mysteries of our world now, there is so much knowledge in this section. also the fact of him having wings is so cool wobbles in appreciation

Inventory - 73/100
I desire more clothes
I want to learn archery someday

Medical - 97/100
nods with understanding
sight 10? is it connected to his eagle mutation?

People - 75/100
YEAH SHOW THAT KING GOD THAT HE'S USELESS

Other - 89/100
big yes

I get a feeling that I raised his ratings a bit because I am very happy today, so if you want to know how I'd rate him on a normal day go down by 5 units or something. or don't. overall, he seems like a great mentor, perfectly fitted into this universe. the more I read about your characters, the more I want to know about your whole story. be proud. I hope I'll see Thad grow throughout it. dances wiggly a wobbly dance
average - 88/100

Mr. Thaddeus is:
54% likely to be my friend
28% likely to by my lover
99% likely to be my party member
70% likely to be my enemy

This is Minnie! I've got a ton of ideas for her story, but for now I'm working on her character and world building more.

I think you haven't made her public. you can change it on her page, next to the editing button. if you do this, let me know, and I'll return to your character as fast as I can!

Hi, would you mind doing my boy Destrian? Invalid Character

I remember him, we've met before. I think it was my other thread, yes, if my memory is correct.

Overview - 97/100
Sa'ekka reminds me of Sokka
wow you're already pulling me deeper inside his story! the name meaning is great! his power is interesting and uncommon! if I want to know more about him that much just from his overview, you're doing it good!

Looks - 85/100
there's so little information here that I don't need to comment this section. I'd add some more fields, but it's up to you. if this is enough for you, then you don't need to worry about changing anything.

Nature - 69/100
I'm sure that he has more mannerisms and flaws! have a conversation with him in your free time and get information out of him!
"Bhugatans" what a hard word. that doesn't really tell me what his prejudices are.
"Hobbies" and "Talents" could be a little longer, too.
"Personality type" and "Conditions" are good. try to write the other fields just like those.

Social - 80/100
"He is a literal prince" but what about his worldview? what's his political orientation? he can be a conservative prince or a liberal one.
Kavicon Buns sound very tasty, how do I bake them?
your names are amazing. they don't sound like some letters glued together, they seem like normal words from another language, and I love that. I really feel like you've made a professional fictional world.

History - 87/100
woah, there's lots of things happening here
so that's Bhugatan. now I know
why was he kidnapped in the first place?
his history is well-written, but is that his whole story? or just his backstory? that sounds like a separate book! if so many great events happen in the past, what's left for the future? I am so curious about his further story, I'd like to know more!

Destrian is such an interesting character! I get lots of high-fantasy vibes from his descriptions! the thing that bugs me the most is lack of information in his "Nature" section (which is the most important!), so I hope that you'll develop him more there. overall, I think he's a good character. I appreciate the names of the universe he's in. good job!
average - 84/100

Destrian is:
76% likely to be my friend
44% likely to by my lover
90% likely to be my party member
87% likely to be my enemy

Okokok I got a shareable link right here

okay, it's my first time seeing her. I wonder what secrets she hides inside her.

Overview - 80/100
"Villain" and Hero aliases? you've piqued my interest.

Looks - 78/100
eyes change color N O I C E
underfed and muscular? I think that doesn't go with one another.
"The faded number 0117 tattooed on the back of her left shoulder" that's interesting

Outfit(s) - 100/100
bonus points for including multiple outfits! I don't see that very often, but it allows us to know more about the character!
she surely loves her earrings
I love the detail put into her clothing! every pin, tear on her jeans, even shoe types! I'm impressed, really! good job, and keep doing that!
I may sound overexcited but this section is just perfect

Nature - 72/100
her mannerisms are well laid out, but I'd call it trivia, not mannerisms. I think that this is a place for her gestures and habits, not preferences. for example, I think "Sleeps in fetal position" and "Never sleeps with any blanket thicker than a quilt" can stay here, but things like "Prefers tea to coffee" and "LOVES a good horror movie" should be in a different place.
next fields are well-written and clear
so she has some fire-explosion-bomb-combustion powers, nice and scary
"Fireproof skin, insides still flammable" oh wow, now I know how to defeat her
I think that her powers are well balanced, so good job!

Social - 93/100
ooh, brownies, you're making me hungry
so that's where the earrings came from
who doesn't like knives as a weapon
💜The Sun Bear💜

History - 80/100

I said before that in "Nature" everything is well laid out, but I think that her backstory should be written in proper full sentences. it's better to read it this way
tragedy - check
her backstory is really interesting, and I'd like to know more about her team! the universe itself sounds great (maybe that's because I love typical magic powers)

Minerva has great potential and I hope that her story is as good as her! remember what I've said and develop her more. I'd be happy to read more about your story sometime. also I'll say that once again that I am in love with her outfits
average - 84/100

Minnie is:
76% likely to be my friend
34% likely to by my lover
97% likely to be my party member
86% likely to be my enemy

Can you rate mine? Ada Freeburn

Ada. an unusual name, but as beautiful. let me see her up close.

Overview - 75/100
leader? hmm, leader of what?

Looks - 78/100
there isn't much information to comment on, really
slash marks? that's interesting. how did she get them?

Nature - 49/100
motivations and talents are okay, but other fields need some work.
"Mannerisms" and "Flaws" could - and should - be more developed. I've said this a few times before. to get to know your character more, ask them questions, interview them, spend a whole day with them daydreaming. look at them, what do they do unknowingly? what are their habits? define her virtues, and then determine her flaws from them. is she brave? make her reckless. is she genuine? make her unable to lie. there's a whole gamut of traits that you can give her, and when you do so, writing down her personality based on them should be easy. and after that, you'll surely assign some hobbies for her.

Social - 87/100
"The world is too wild at the moment" I feel you, we all feel you
that occupation at the age of 15? she's achieved more than I ever will
11th realm? everything is getting more and more interesting.
HER WEAPONS HAVE NAMES YES YES YES

History - 70/100
her history covers every major points in her life, and is just enough. I'd like to know about her more, though, her childhood and relations with her parents.

she seems like a nice character for now. I can't really figure out her personality yet, but everything begins well. she gives me such mysterious vibes, because for now I know about her so little, and about her universe, too. I hope that you'll develop her more, so she becomes a well-written and realistic character! (I'll also say again that I love the fact that her weapons have names!)
average - 72/100

Ada is:
50% likely to be my friend
20% likely to by my lover
70% likely to be my party member
30% likely to be my enemy

Hello! If you are still open to do this could you do Otis? His backstory and some relationships is still a work in progress so any and all critiques are good! Lately he has been bordering Mary Sue territory as well so just a heads up for that……if you have any questions I got you

understood. if his backstory and relationships have little information written, I won't rate them.

Overview - 89/100
ooh, demon characters are nice, I wonder how you've written him. and judging by my quick glance on his sections, you've written A LOT. like, wow, there are so many words in his relationships. I get a feeling that I'll spend a long time on him.

Looks - 90/100
I suppose that the only thing that differentiates him from humans are his eyes. is there something more? if he's among humans, does he hide his demon traits, and vice versa? or maybe he doesn't have to hide anything?

Nature - 95/100
his mannerisms are very well-written! although, I'd like to know more about his "demonic side". maybe I'll find it in "Race" or "Magic" section.
I'm so curious about his backstory
okay he's definitely going to be my friend
"I want to say…" then say it. don't be afraid.
I see nothing troublesome here, but I can give you some advice if you're concerned about that "Mary Sue territory". firstly, define your characters' virtues, and then stretch them so far that they become flaws. if they're always honest, make them afraid to tell lies, and then put them into a situation where they have to deceive someone. after that, watch them panic and find a solution. remember that virtues and flaws should be balanced, but even more flaws are accepted. to be sure that they definitely aren't Mary Sue, make them fail or do something wrong in your story. make them misunderstand something, break down from their responsibilities, push them far beyond their limits. there must be a situation from which the character can't come out with no effort. I hope that I've explained it well because this is my limit of English language. good luck ^-^

History - 80/100
after you finish writing his history, I advise you to reread it to correct some minor mistakes.
I really liked that part of him becoming a Royal Messenger! I didn't quite expect that!
his backstory is good, not minding the mistakes. I hope that you'll write the part that you missed soon, and determine more of Otis' traits from it!

Social - 96/100
what exactly is "Guardian religion"?
"Quetzil" this is such an interesting name, can I have an exemplary sentence of this language?
Pasta Yes
woah that necklace must be pretty
💜❤️💚frogs💚❤️💜

Relationships - 98/100
oh boy here we go
his mother's relationship is good, but I get a feeling that it's written a bit more from her perspective. it's Otis' page, so I think that majority should be written from his POV.
I admire that you put so much thought into his relationships. it really helps me to understand Otis and I feel like I've known him for 5 years at least
he is such a good brother
the same as "History" here, reread when you finish and correct mistakes.
is impressed
I admire your effort. I think I'm going to… checks notes …take a leaf out of your book. wow I just learned a new idiom (wisdom +5, self-appraisal +10)
and I even get to know more about your other characters! that's great!
Goddess? who's that?

Race/species - 85/100
"not be able to react strongly or understand emotional cues". is that me? insert meme maybe I am a demon.

Magic - 93/100
I hope you'll find that list quickly!
everything's nice here but remember to not make him too op!

wow, Otis is surely a very developed character! it was a pleasure reading about him. when you finish his history and relationships, I think there will be nothing more necessary to add to his page! you did a great job, you've made me impressed and curious about his later story, and you've made Otis such a likeable character! be proud!
average - 90/100

Otis is:
98% likely to be my friend
78% likely to by my lover
83% likely to be my party member
48% likely to be my enemy

I have someone I would like you to meet :) Zane Smyth
He's not completely finished but don't hold back and be sure to have fun!

Alayna my love I hope my letter finds you well you have no idea how I am excited you are one of my favorite writers or worldbuilders whatever you want to call yourself out there just a quick reminder okay let's get down to business

Overview - 80/100
Zain is such an unusual name but I love it
so he 'eventually' joins the group but 'temporarily'? that's interesting
ooh, early 1900s. even more interesting

Looks - 88/100
YOU HAVE PUT KILOS AND CENTIMETERS NEXT TO FEET AND POUNDS YOU CANNOT IMAGINE HOW I AND MY NON-AMERICAN FRIENDS ARE GRATEFUL THANK YOU
get this man a comb
I am sorry but I cannot imagine what a "normal" nose shape is. it would be best if you described it better
prosthetic arm that's so cool and that gloves thingy he does is also cool

Nature - 76/100
I think there's no need to put so much things in the brackets. just write it next to the main information
he plays with his knives? no wonder he has so many scars
ok he's not likely to be my friend. but he tries to be nice, so we may be good acquaintances.
I have looked up 1900s prosthetics. they indeed look really cool.
nooo, don't share his secrets!
and now I'm sad

Social - 79/100
I'll be waiting for Mackenzie!
I want to travel too
oh I'd love to eat that cake

History - 82/100
WHAT A WONDERFUL GRANDPA
of course, of course, spoilers are sacred. turns a blind eye

I see that he isn't finished, because the descriptions aren't really gripping nor exciting. the brackets also quite disrupted my reading, especially in parts where there was a lot of them. try writing more consistently to reduce their amount. as for Zain himself, he looks like an interesting character! his personality is growing, and his backstory peculiar. I get really eerie vibes from him. and I'm really curious about his further story, and who's Mackenzie? who's that "acquaintance"? write, write more. don't keep me in suspense.
average - 81/100

Zain is:
45% likely to be my friend
19% likely to by my lover
87% likely to be my party member
82% likely to be my enemy

ooooo could you do Haven?? Haven Lomasi Dockside

hello, Haven. nice to meet you.

Overview - 78/100
that's… an interesting role.
is there a reason behind her other name?
and that's an interesting name for a universe

Looks - 90/100
I wonder what condition her hair is in
oh she wears contacts! that makes her even more unique!
and a heart birthmark! she surely stands out!

Nature - 96/100
she really seems intimidating to me
if I had been her friend, I'd really like her. but now she seems kinda repulsive to me. maybe if I had the chance and time to bond with her, we'd get along well. but I'm not sure where would we end up.
she really is unique, not only in her appearance! I absolutely am impressed

Social - 89/100
what's "wicca"? never heard of it, to be honest
frozen yoghurt yum
knives!

History - 59/100
oh whAT A TWIST
her history is rather brief. I'd like to know about her more. what are her feelings towards her stepdad, her brothers, her mom? did she have some kind of a therapy after such a major event? what was she like in her early life? if you have time, expand her history. it will also help you to understand her better.

Haven is such an extraordinary character. I think she's the most unique one I've rated so far (so bonus points)! her looks and nature are well-written, but I advise you to work on her history more. maybe you'll find some more traits to give her throughout developing it?
average - 82 + 5 bonus final points/100

Haven is:
40% likely to be my friend
3% likely to by my lover
71% likely to be my party member
93% likely to be my enemy

I’ve updated Ada: Ada Freeburn

I see, that's great that you're working on her! I've read through her page once again and noticed that some things in "Nature" aren't fully finished. you can link her for me to rate her once again when you fill out all her fields thoroughly!

Hey I have 2 characters if you don't mind- they are still in extreme early stages so there’s still a lot more work to do until I finalize them.
Theo:

Naiche:
https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/1045516#!

I stated that I'd rate only one character per post, but since there's no queue after you, I'll let it slide (but shh don't tell my boss). let's start with Theo:

Overview - 87/100
that's a lot of roles

Looks - 90/100
CENTIMETERS NEXT TO FEET THANK YOU VERY MUCH
oh, that beauty mark is really unique!
is sad in kg

Nature - 61/100
I wouldn't put that description in his mannerisms. maybe it will find its place in his personality field?and here you could write about his habits, ticks, etc.
I think he could use some more flaws
reads motivations, is sad now
the term "Fake" doesn't really suit me here. these traits are still a part of his personality, right? does he act this way when he meets new people? or maybe people in general? instead of "Fake", you could write that he behaves like this under certain circumstances.
woah he's getting more and more interesting

Social - 74/100
I think "Rich" is not a job
his favorite weapons are words! thinking outside the box, I see!
robotic voice c h i k e n n o o g e t

History - 49/100
no n o no n- you've mentioned his mother and his brother enough times to make me really interested in his life, and now I can't read his whole backstory! I hope you'll write it as fast as possible! I'll be waiting!

Theo is indeed an interesting character! he needs some more work in "Nature" and of course, backstory! I know that writing so much about a character's story can be draining, but you can firstly write a draft that mentions all the major point (like his brother's death - I want to know what happened!).
average - 72/100

Theo is:
34% likely to be my friend
30% likely to by my lover
60% likely to be my party member
68% likely to be my enemy

now let's do Naiche!

Overview - 88/100
a help for Theo. loves

Looks - 91/100
I've always wanted to try that hairstyle
a car crash? you're making me curious, just like when I was rating Theo

Nature - 65/100
the same things as "Mannerisms" in Theo's page ^
no prejudices? I didn't think it was possible
"sleeping is his passion" too many can relate
I'd expand his "Personality type" and "Flaws" field.

Social - 83/100
💜❤️💚frogs💚❤️💜
brass knuckles

History - 50/100
here! same as Theo! tell me when you write their backstories!

Naiche seems like a nice guy, from what I've learned from his page. I think I like him more than Theo, but he seems like a secondary character than a main one. I hope you'll develop him more soon, and let me know when you finish both backstories!
average - 75/100

Naiche is:
70% likely to be my friend
54% likely to by my lover
79% likely to be my party member
45% likely to be my enemy