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WILL CRITIQUE CHARACTERS AND RESPOND FAIROY QUICKLY

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@Friendlyglittery7 group

Oh hello! I was wondering if you'd like to critique my character, Vioetta. I already polished her up and completed the base of her character so I'd like some extra improvements!

She's an anthromorphic wolf (They're called alillians in my story) and she's an anti-social bandita who was heavily influenced by her bandit friend.

@Kev

My child Jesse. Please destroy him. Rip him apart. He's part of the Fallout (post apocalyptic) universe.

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Invalid Character Hello! I hope you can critique my character! I want to focus on personality and backstory for now but I don't mind.