Hey, I have new characters to critique and I want to make sure they're believable. They aren't perfect but I'm tryin'. And you definitely don't have to critique all of them in one go, I know that's a lot. :)
Here's a link to the universe, you might need it: Esperanza Black and the Crew of the Silver Spirit
Adarius: Adarius LaBelle
Courtney: Courtney Velarde
Li: Li Zhang
Mariah: Mariah Black
(Pronounced mah-rye-ah not ma-ree-ya)
Please let me know what you think! Thanks!