I just need some help to know if I am going in the right direction with her. Thanks!
Here's my baby gal: Ashanti Eleanor Warren
Would anyone like to critique my character please?
She seems very sweet! Kind of reminds me of Hazel Levesque–especially with the "do no harm take no shit" thing she has going on. I love how you went into detail for each of the descriptions. She reminds me of warm blankets.
She really comes off as a sweet girl, but one who's also strong and will verbally fight you if you differ from opinion.
I love how you put 'angry feminist', because that's exactly what comes up to me; a strong woman who knows her rights and will fight for them. Do no harm but take no shit really fits with this.
Nothing above a young woman like this.
Also, great love for pilot jackets xd
You mention she knows martial arts, but don't mention these in her hobbies. Is this a thing she taught herself?
That's my only question haha, I love her! I think you did a great job!