Would someone mind critiquing my species?
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person_off
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Alright, some things to think about:
- You said The Misers weigh up to 300 lbs, but that it doesn't show; how would that much weight not show? Also, more specifically, how would it not show on someone that's 5'0"?
- Do they all have black eyes and brown skin? If not, what other colors could they have?
- You said their political style was anarchy, so how do they get along? Do they live in groups? Do they often steal their gold from each other or only other species?
- If they live underground, how are they forest trolls? Do they come out from underground a lot?