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So the animal is called a "Lioj", and it's about as big as a coyote. It has a dog-like structure. It has a mane of wiry brown hair, which almost serves like a defense system; with venom pumping through it's glands around the mane, it makes the fur stand out and some of it clumps together into a point. If the venom finds it's way into your bloodstream, it will kill you within an hour if you don't treat it correctly. Lioj are light brown in color with dark brown spots, and yellowish-white fangs, and yellow feline-like eyes.