The Soul Labyrinth

Tolkalee jumped up and followed her through the portal. "I hate portals."

Hinata leaped through the portal.

"They're better than dying."

"And before you say anything, no, I legally cannot die. It sucks."

(Where did they end up?)

"True enough," Tolkalee agreed.

(The hall were Hinata was burning)

(oh ok)
Loki turns to her squadron and sighed "men we have a problem. Hinata has went into the Soul Labyrinth and we must go in to help her"

Hinata looked at the burn marks.
"Again, I hate being sick."

(I left Tatsuo behind on purpose, to force them to go get him)

(Can I not open the portal for the whole squadron? That would not be effective in the Labyrinth)

(Okay, none of the Knights are there so…you’re safe!!)

(perhaps Loki is the only one who makes it through)

(Okay sure)

Hinata closed the portal.
Wait…
"Crap!! WHERE IS TATSUO?!"

Loki turned to Tatsuo "Do you think that you could make a small portal for a platoon of around 3 or 5 to make it through?"

(Tatsuo is already in the soul labyrinth!!)

Hinata looked around.
"How the hell do you get back to where we were?!"

Knight K was nearby the halls where Hinata ended up. He was holding onto…someone’s head. “Shhhh…stay quiet and you might go back not getting killed” the knight whispered to Tatsuo who had several cuts on his whole body.

(i'm flustered)

Hinata tried to sense Tatsuo. She was connected to him through the piece of her soul she had used to forge his soul, but she couldn't feel him.
"This is not good…"

Tolkalee jerked his thumb at the doorway behind him as he began backing towards it.

(Just have your character think about someone they cared about who died and tell us how they died)

Hinata followed after him, worried and scared as hell.

Seeing that she was following him, Tolkalee turned on his heel and raced into the room. He pulled his bow out and began raining arrows down on the knights there. He was trying to give Hinata cover, to get her friend.

Hinata rushed in.
"Tatsuo? Tatsuo!!"

Knight K stood up holding Tatsuo by his throat in front of him. “C’mon…fire your arrows…I dare you” the Knight was using Tatsuo as a meat shield. (Since they’re both souls, they’re able to touch each other)

(loki lost her youngest brother to the Soul Labyrinth they was killed by a knight. He didn't mean to go into he was just walking around and stumbled upon it)

(If Loki’s brother went into the Soul Labyrinth, means they’ve lost someone dear to them?)

"Tatsuo!! YOU BITCH-"
"Hinata no!" Tatsuo gasped out.

(yes she loved her brother all she has now are her two sisters)