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Brainstorming+writing practice: Let's make a novel!

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His name is Charles, Charlie for short. He has hair that imitates blue slime and often drips in his face. He has a normal arm and then he has an arm made of the same substance as his hair and it can morph into random things. He's really nice, but is vey shy. He rebeled from the family and became a killer known by the name: *I haven't decided yet, I'm thinking something like The Dripping Killer.

Maybe we need a bit motivation for why he would be a killer. I always imagined him as this nice yet shy person but he puts on a shell of confidence and tries to be inspiring, but doesn't actually think he's good enough to be in a role of importance.

Also we need to align him to Lunos via some genetic features so they all kind of seem related

The hair and pale skin, both their hair colors are similar shades of blue

The killer part I think was him trying to protect his family from people like their parents, who were abusive?

@CopperQueen

What of his name is Dark Golem? Only thinking of that because in the webtoon The Gamer, Jihan makes Golems and they are able to transform their arms into different things like machines guns etc

Golem kind of means he was created by someone else to serve them/ was created by magic and that's not really what he is, he's an own kind of mythical creature

It's just an idea lol
I didnt know that's what golem meant, that's pretty cool

Idk what to call him

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I ACTUALLY PUT IT ON DRIVE!

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Here's his main thing, with a fancy outfit becuase yes.

His mask and his symbol.

@CopperQueen

I ACTUALLY PUT IT ON DRIVE!

Whoo! Can we access?

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Think so

We need to request access…

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I'll fix it.

@The-N-U-T-Cracker

cough you can post it to imgbb if needed cough

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@CopperQueen

Charlie is such a cutie I love him

@Huxly

henlo

@CopperQueen

Hi

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Charlie is such a cutie I love him

Thankies!

@fruitbatsandearlgrey

Sorry I haven't been contributing much, is there anything I can do?

@CopperQueen

Sorry I haven't been contributing much, is there anything I can do?

We kind of need to make a timeline/summary, draw designs for all the charachters and name the twins.
Otherwise just throw out some ideas you have and we'll see what to keep and what not to

Are the twin boy girl twins or…

@fruitbatsandearlgrey

I actually had this idea where there could be, like, a big lake towards the central regions that connects to rivers in the other regions, and there could be water mermaids, but they're the polar opposite of the magmermaids in everything and the two species are longstanding rivals and there could be a subplot where the witches are trying to make allies of both but they won't cooperate.

@CopperQueen

I actually had this idea where there could be, like, a big lake towards the central regions that connects to rivers in the other regions, and there could be water mermaids, but they're the polar opposite of the magmermaids in everything and the two species are longstanding rivals and there could be a subplot where the witches are trying to make allies of both but they won't cooperate.

Magmaids VS Mermaid rivalry sounds really good or a sub-plot!
For story's sake, the mermaids are actually more dangerous than the magmaids but most humanoids avoid the entire southern region, so they assume magmaids are the worse kind

@CopperQueen

Also that reminds me, we need to make a map for the overall world so we know how to have them travel around it

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Good idea!

I cant try to make a really rough map…?

But for anyone making the map, we need more info. OS it like a mega continent? Or are there smaller continents for each region?

@GroupAccount

This is Copper from the group account.
It's like a really big island that basically makes up the entire world, because there are currently no other known locations.
the regions fade into eachother at the north-west, north-east and south-west region, but on the others there are controlled borders with more sudden and dramatic transitions

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GREAT IDEA!

@CopperQueen

Also I have a little idea for the magmaids vs mermaids thing

What if the magmaid's representants is a really down to earth, mature and aromantic realist
while the mermaid's represantant is a love-struck enthusiastic but unprofessional optimist

And they just
Don't understan eachother
AT ALL

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And then they fall for each other, for the gay

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Or they eventauly become best friends.

@CopperQueen

Mermaid: Ahhh that girl is so cute what do I do…
Magmaid: Talk to her.
Mermaid: I can't just TALK TO HER
Magmaid: It's not that hard, it's like talking to me.
Mermaid: Yeah but she's cute….
Magmaid: HEY!

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Yes.
10/10
Would recomend