Hay can someone give me a review on this blurb I got
CAN I GET SOM HELP CAN I PLEASE JUST GET SO WRITING HELP
So it's the year 1800 and every baby born between March 29th and June 14 have the same looks but different skills. But truthfully there were only 6 kids born then (watch me slowly kill of like 4 of them just to cause you pain) and eventually they all meet at a Cafe named 'The meet up' two of them are 10 row of them are 15 and two of them are 20 (bout to kill the 10-year-olds first) when a crazy scientist who runs the cafe meets them he tells of a place named 'Wendago' and all they have to do is make it to there and give the men a message 'be warned of the future for what it holds, because nothing is made of gold' Then when they make it to 'Wendago' the ten-year-olds are killed (would you like to know how?) and they have to go to another place called 'Count' and relay a message 'be warned of the past, because everything is made of glass' once that message is said the 20-year-olds are killed (wanna know!) and the 15-year-olds have to go to a place called 'Forest' and relay another message 'be warned of now, because no one will bow’
All right the motivation for them to go is money
I think it's pretty good… You crammed a lot into it though… And some of the transitions are rough…