Can I get some grammar checkers?

I'm not to bothered if the story is bad, I just really want to know if I'm bad on the grammar. So yeah. Just give it a read and tell me if I am.

Anyone? Please?

Hello I can do it, just give me a bit to find my laptop (I'm on my phone lol) and I'll give it a quick read

Okay thanks!

I'm about halfway through, but I need to eat breakfast before I leave for church in 20 minutes. I'll finish checking it after church, if that's okay? I'll be back in around 4 hours from now

That’s fine!

Okay, just finished all my editing! It was a great story, I really enjoyed it!

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Want anyone to do a second check?

Thanks! Also yes do.

I'll take a look ;)

Yay!