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Forum Game!! Pass the Song (OPEN)

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(Impossible Justification)

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Impossible Justification

Everyone is screaming, what's happening in my head
They won't stop until I'm beaten
I think it’s a dream, but then I see
The anger in their eyes, the fire that burns is real
The waves pulling my head under; I can’t breathe
Water cascading over endlessly, I'm drowning underneath it all
Waiting endlessly, watching endlessly
The chains on my ankles, pulling me down
Deeper, deeper, deeper
As I wait, just waiting endlessly
My lungs scream but I cannot be free
Darkness will not let me be
The demons claw at my skin
Screaming effortlessly, I struggle
I fight for my life, through sweat and strife and blood and tears
When will this pain let me go? I thought I would be free, but I’m not free
Enchained, cast away, I will fight for freedom until it kills me
My death shall not be in vain, my final breath will be in my own name
Until I’m free, every breath I will take will hurt; until I’m free, every drop of blood will be agony
And we will fight, fight, not out of spite, but for a better tomorrow, for all that is right
Justification is all I will know, for those under me will grow
We will shout for those who have no voice, scream for the people who are given no choice
We will grow like vines growing until we reach the top of the food chain
We will fight for our rights and for the people we love
Justified, justified; none shall hurt as much as I have
Tear down the walls, rip off the chains, breath in the fresh air, bathe in the sunlight…
We are free
We are free~ Yeah, yeah
We are free
Free to do what we want
Free to be who we are
What was impossible is now a reality, our dreams fulfilled
Soaring high only to fall
Down… and get up again

Here it is!! The full thing!!

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now i wanna add music to it//

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Its boootiful

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(Should I cover it?)

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im gonna try to cover it too//

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(a lot of the notes were repetitive i'm sorry)

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that's really freaking good… like… what…
I'm so confused how is this that good???

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(thank you!!)

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sorry I just wanted to say the song that yall wrote^ wao~ amazin amazin

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dude can another song be written because i kinda want to be a part of this))

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and more songs are good))

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(sure! new song!)
I love the way
Your moon gray eyes just dance when you speak
The way you smile unintentionally
And yet
I'm not what you seek
(can the new song rhyme? or can it least try to rhyme? it's hard to make stanzas if it doesn't, sorry for bitching on y'all)

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(title: love vs. the homo sapien agenda lmao jk jk)

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(https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bbGb-pGHICqgKAZ0XJgiUNRN6UvGeNtu/view)

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(sure! new song!)
I love the way
Your moon gray eyes just dance when you speak
The way you smile unintentionally
And yet
I'm not what you seek
(can the new song rhyme? or can it least try to rhyme? it's hard to make stanzas if it doesn't, sorry for bitching on y'all)

(the way it goes [i guess?] is:
1
2
2
3
2

You dance, with me
I look at you, passionately
Yet you smiled so fake
And left me in the night
Left me with heartbreak

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(a lot of the notes were repetitive i'm sorry)

(Holy shit thats awesome)

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(how are you so good at singing?!)

@InfinityCry*

(i just listened to it.. WOAH)

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(Thank you all so much!!)
or
(Thank y'all so much!)
(sorry not sorry)

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(i guess the chorus come next)

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let me listen in a bit/

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In every way
I wish that I could try to make you see
the good as well as the best parts of me
my heart,
knows that we don't want

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((that's my contribution))

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may i try to do a sing of our first song?//

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hey @"ConnieTheMediator(TheArticulateSmol)" how did you record the audio on google drive?//

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((it was @Demiphoenix1125 that recorded it. I think @"ConnieTheMediator(TheArticulateSmol)" just clicked "quote"))

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But i will wait
and i will wait
till you finaly love me
i will wait
and i will wait

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ah thanks//