pass
say in the NaNoWriMo forums that your goal is to write 20 words by the end of the month. Pretend it will be hard
Emi wants to do this v bad, but she already stated her goal and her plans. She is frusturated. She also wants to know how long she has to do this for.
you could delete the thread after like, a day or two
Pass because I'm on PC
Critique my character Nova! She's pretty much perfect already but I still want to see other people's opinions! I worked super duper hard~
spits out tea
Pass…
Act like Kylo Ren for one day
Pass
critique my friend Eurick's character Nova! She's pretty much perfect already but Eurick wants to get second opinions! He worked really really hard !!!! Invalid Character
Pass…again
Post a poop emoji in all of your RPs
ACCEPTED! I HAVE NO RPS! HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Go to the oldest thread on the General Chat forums and bump it
Accepted!
Change your username to @gudetama for one day
OH MY GOD THIS IS THE BEST CHARACTER I HAVE EVER MADE AND YOU PASSED? SHE'S A GREAT PERSON AND YOU DON'T EVEN GIVE HER A CHANCE >:(
;-;
Also pass.
Critique my character please~ Invalid Character
Accepted
make a thread. Mention andrew (Our Supreme Lord and Overseer). Ask him to critique Nova
Pass…again
Speak like Doge for the day
Is accept.
Nova=much wow. Such critique pls~ Invalid Character
Pass…again. Sorry
Have an emoji in every sentence you say for the day
Pass. What’s up with you and emojis?
Emi dares thou to tell everyone to stop repeating dares on this chat.
I'm sorry I really can't do the doge dare it's too unbearable I have attempted
Pass. What’s up with you and emojis?
Emi dares thou to tell everyone to stop repeating dares on this chat.
Nothing…
Accepted!
Change your profile picture to Darth Vader for one day
@"(In-Honor-of-CW)-Alot-Is-Not-a-Word.-You-Don’t-Write-Alittle,-Abunch,-Acantaloupe,-Aporkchop-so-Don’t-Write-Alot." I am conflicted by your dare and the cringy character dare.
accepted… sigh (if can figure out how to change profile pictures aaarg)
I dare you to make everything you write in an AABBCCDD rhyme scheme
What…
you would rhyme like this
rhymes so dank you cannot piss
and when another sees your words
the horses will disband their herds
Pass because I don't know what that means
Create a one page one shot on about wore shipping a plastic cup and send the link here
…Please explain
Just write about any person real or fake wore shipping a plastic cup. It must be at least a page long.
ACCEPTED YES
Make a pun out of your name and post it on this chat
NEVER! I am pun intolerant
Make a spelling thread and rant about how difficult it is to spell ant
OKAY NOVA GOT HER FIRST CRITIQUE
ok @"Euric Knight"
so this is all obviously just some ideas to consider. disregard it all if you want. i was a bit harsh because that's what i'm like for ALL critiques.
not sure how she can be girly but a huge tomboy at the same time. I'm not entirely sure if it's even possible.
so she's not SUPER underweight, but she's at least 10 pounds underweight. add why. does she diet? exercise? there's not many ways you can be quite underweight and healthy without some healthy methods.
"Super duper DUPER cut pigtails!" what does this mean. clarify a bit.
how do blue eyes look like the moon?? last i checked the moon was white.
"Human, unicorn, angel, demon, vampire!!!!" asdhaklerhwevlkra what. how can she be that many? is she a shape shifter? how is she a bit unicorn (don't tell me. a human. did the nasty with a unicorn.)
how does her skin tone change? does it stay pale colors or does it go straight-up deep maroon sometimes? when and why does it change? is it a slow process? can she change it at will? how is she all of those races at once? is this a fantasy thing where these races all coexist in harmony? if not, how in all of heck is she all of them, especially if everyone else is human??
"She's really cute and petite!!" cute i don't understand. petite is ok. is she a rectangle? a pear? an hourglass? (please for the love of god don't make her a barbie doll).
identifying marks - um what. are they makeup. if they are natural how?? add more identifying marks. how would someone discern her in a crowd or in a picture (minus her fame?)
"She's super nice and cute and popular but so many people bully her!!!" this is not a mannerism. a mannerism is a way that someone talks. why would people bully her if she's nice and cute and popular? don't make them hate her for no reason. that's just unreal and really annoying.
what is the purpose of the story? if she goes on a quest, why? the motivations often depend on the story. if the story is just her doing concerts and stuff, then the motivations are okay, but think about spicing up the story.
"She's so clumsy and such a mess!! She'd lose her head if it wasn't attached!" okay. add more. she needs personality flaws. something that will make her relatable and not cookie-cutter perfect.
prejudices are unfounded hate for an unrealistically generalized group of people. for example racism is an example of an extreme prejudice, whereas someone (an example. not me don't worry) might hate all republicans or democrats because of the representation of their group. please give her some prejudices, even small. we all have them, even if they're tiny and almost unnoticable.
"She's so good at everything" absolutely NOT. i appreciate that you've given her at least one semi-flaw (that she's terrible at cooking) but she can't be "so good at everything". just unrealistic, unrelatable and kind of annoying to read in stories tbh.
"She's sooooo nice and giving to everyone around her!! " more of a personality please. if she's like this why the heck is she bullied? we need some flaws to counteract this angelic perfection.
little tip - don't put "i want to be her friend" in there. don't use "i". don't put personal opinions, especially if she isn't real.
"school academy" uh. please give it a name. in all honesty i don't mean any offense but this made me chuckle a bit. you've basically named it "school school" lol
"Her parent ignored her and she hated herself :(((( but her boyfriend and soulmat Sonic let her move is with him!!! >///<" why, since when, she's a literal pop star if her parents ignored her how did she become that? what turned her into the person she is today?? how is she a pop star if she's still in high school? it's pretty rare for that to happen. when did Sonic let her move in? when did she meet him?
SONIC - how does she know he's her soulmate??? at 17?? is this a soulmate au?? in which case say so.
so. in all honesty she could use just a bit of development. unless this was your intention, then DEFINITELY make her less perfect. at this point she kind of seems like that perfect cookie-cutter angel that never did anything wrong but is still for some reason bullied, even though she's a pop star.
sorry. i was pretty harsh. good job so far, you've got some good information down, but has room for improvement if you want to add it.
this is just a tip obviously and you don't have to take it at all, but maybe consider using more formal language such as less exclamation points and more clarification instead of words like "designer and cute" for clothes. it's your choice tho!!
What should I say?
I AM DYING
