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@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo forum 16 comments schedule
@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

Talk about your characters! Their personalities, their appearances their advantages and disadvantages! Anything… Let's have a good chat!

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Oh damn….

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

What?

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I have been dying to do this.

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

Talk to me! What do you want to discuss?

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Okay!
So, I need to add some flaws onto my characters powers!

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

OK… What are their powers?

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Avery, has vocal based powers and can control sound. I think the drawback for him should be something damaging his vocal cords, does that sound okay?

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

Yeah. I guess…

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Then we have Teddy who can control metal, I was thinking he gets something along the lines of mercury poisoning.

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

Maybe his powere are dependent upon mental and physical stamina?

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Oh! Good idea!

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Hi! I'd like some input on how to write these two guys ( Claudius Marlott
and Huxley Descant) without making them sound too similar.

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

Maybe atick with sensory details for one and pragmatic descriptions for the other… Stress the differences in their emotions and motivations…

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Okay! Thanks, Shuri!

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

No problem!