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poetry sharing!!

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person_off
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Thanks!

@Bandito

The mimes, the mimes, they fill my mind
Looking, pulling, twisting time
The mimes, the mimes, won't go away
They want me to leave
I want to stay

The mimes, the mimes, fill underneath
Below hair, behind eyes, breaking my teeth
The mimes, the mimes, they lift their hands
They never know
Just who I am

The mimes, the mimes, they express thought
Don't speak, don't say whose battle's fought
The mimes, the mimes, they're stuck in me
But they don't know
Who I can be

person_off
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That's kinda creepy but good!

person_off
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I like it!

@Tiani

Bad Weather

It's all in your head
Dreaming in bed
For hopeless things
For present kings
If I had just tried
Swallowed my pride
Took off the blind
Someone to find
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Lying freak
Tongue-in-cheek
Hater who
Doesn't know what to do
An empty soul
A hungry ghoul
Who won't
Eat because of the front
She's created
Won't you stay alive
Take the dive
Bones, heart shatter
Doesn't matter
You're a missing brick
A tockless tick
They should be glad
Why are they sad?
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Smoking wreck
Unsigned check
Of a kid
Who likes what she undid
Sad little mess
An unwise guess
Of a worm
Who seems to like
The storm
She's created
Do you still care now?
My final bow
My final trick
To get so sick
Well now you have it
My new habit
Of breaking bones
I want to own
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Hopeless child
Lost in the wild
Coming here
To explain tears
A distant fight
A muffled light
Shining now
Just to reveal the cloud
She's created.
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than
A feather
A tether
Bad weather
No other!

Oh my God this is so genius, a tackles stick literally made me stop and go "wow"

@Bandito

Thank you!

person_off
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person_off
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It's four in the morning
And
I'm
Not
Asleep.
I love it.
I shouldn't.
It's four in the morning.
Shiny and sparkling and red and sting
And I go to get bandages
And lie back down.
Parents are out.
Siblings at camp.
I haven't left my bed in two days.
Staring at the ceiling
I can't feel my toes
Or my legs
Or my fingers
But it does sound interesting
Like I'm under water.
Maybe I should get a sandwich
Take my prozac
And write a few words.
My characters hate me now
I haven't been paying any attention to them.
I just realized I've been
Holding
My breath.
Neat.
Well, I'm seeing things.
I hate my imagination.
I get snared within my daydreams
It's rather annoying
Nevermind.
I don't have a function anymore.
I just
D
R
I
F
T
The door opens
And
The
Light
Hurts my eyes
For a second.
She sits down and tells me it'll be okay.
I must have been crying.
My eyes are damp.
I feel burning.
But I can't remember
Doing that.
Well, goodnight.

(Here's some bullshit I wrote a few months ago that I don't have the energy to rewrite so it sounds less cheezy.)

@Bandito

Wow that's amazing.

person_off
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(Aww thanks! I tried! I'm always very literal for like, whatever reason, so sorry about the lack of cryptic metaphors.)

@Relsey-TheElder

It’s crazy how little I’ve slept
Not to say I haven't tried
Sometimes I just can’t
Other times my body just won't
Maybe I’m too hot, too cold,breathing wrong, there’s always a problem
Not moving ,moving to much, laying on the wrong side, flip over, roll around, still no sleep
I Should be able to fix this shouldn’t I?
Am I broken? Is something wrong with me, And I deficient, unworthy.
Can’t I sleep any more?

person_off
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its a bit darker than I normally write
They always come to the balcony.
They always have the same look.
And every time they look at me,
I fall into their book.

I listen to their crying
i help the best I can.
Even if I’m lying,
I still take up my stand.

It’s always different, yet the same
its always hard to bear
And each day’s another broken name
That I have to hear.

But who will come to the ledge
if I were to leave?
Would anybody guard the edge?
Would anybody grieve?

For all the lost lost and broken souls,
for all the ones that couldn’t see
would anyone come get me
If I was the one on the balcony?

@croccin-champagne

Oh dear. That's simultaneously beautiful and horribly sad.

person_off
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But who will come to the ledge
if I were to leave?
Would anybody guard the edge?
Would anybody grieve?

For all the lost lost and broken souls,
for all the ones that couldn’t see
would anyone come get me
If I was the one on the balcony?

I know this is corny and all, but we would <3

person_off
Deleted user

But who will come to the ledge
if I were to leave?
Would anybody guard the edge?
Would anybody grieve?

For all the lost lost and broken souls,
for all the ones that couldn’t see
would anyone come get me
If I was the one on the balcony?

I know this is corny and all, but we would <3

Aw. Thanks, random internet stranger.

person_off
Deleted user

But who will come to the ledge
if I were to leave?
Would anybody guard the edge?
Would anybody grieve?

For all the lost lost and broken souls,
for all the ones that couldn’t see
would anyone come get me
If I was the one on the balcony?

I know this is corny and all, but we would <3

Aw. Thanks, random internet stranger.

Awkward salute Anytime, Notebook sibling!