Self promo/Book critiques!

You can promote your books on here, and anyone in the comment section can come critique them!

I needed this!
This is a co-op story me and a couple friends made who are Notebook.ai users! (Their names are in the description.) It starts out light-hearted but it gets more action based as it goes on. The first couple chapters are kinda crazy but after Chapter five and a little of Four, it gets soberer.
Here's the link!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/152721227-the-underground-cutlery-cults-civil-war/parts