Like, not to get all preachy but… Christopher Columbus and all the others were like, historically bad dudes.
Christopher Columbus was an asshole on god
It's gonna be a long road, and a very
very fooking
slow burn
as it should be lol
Trust me, she deserves it!
Oh nuuuuuuuu this is going to be horrible for them then lol
This all sounds like it’s going to be very very painful….so yes hyped but also depressed for it lol
WOAH PAGE 102
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Yo Max!!
ac_unit
wHoA. YaNkEe WiTh No BriM
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The weather fit her mood Gloomy She couldn't believe her Sister kill her Mother THERE Mother out of jealousy ¨why?, why would she do this my wedding was two days ago everything seemed fine then..why?!" she wept ¨Luna dear I know you're still in shock but you need to prepare for your Coronation¨ said Creator Alexis Coronation…I never expected it to happen like this my mum was supposed to be here, she was supposed to hand me the crown when she was ready to step down not get murdered¨ said Luna ¨ I know sweetie I know I was expecting her to be here too never in a million years did I expect my best friend to get murdered by her own daughter…its time for you to rise luna your now the official leader of the elementals you will use your powers for the greater good and bring humanity back to balance ¨said creator Alexis ¨thank you mommy¨said luna ¨anything for my daughter-in-law¨
ac_unit
Right, right. I must say, within 6 seconds of reading this I already spotted at least five problems.
fastfood
RIght, right. I must say, within 6 seconds of reading this I already spotted at least five problems.
I don't write that often I'm a beginner
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Same.
ac_unit
I see…
group
Right, right. I must say, within 6 seconds of reading this I already spotted at least five problems.
^^^
fastfood
im TrYiNg
ac_unit
Never said you weren't.
language
The weather fit her mood
Add a period.
Gloomy
Add another period.
She couldn't believe her Sister kill her Mother
Sister should not be capitalized, and neither should mother. Kill should be turned to killed.
THERE Mother out of jealousy
It's their mother, not there. Also, mother should not be capitalized. And there should be a period after jealousy.
language
And now I have to leave. Gotta prepare some stuff for school tomorrow.
ac_unit
yo why the fuck are you posting that here
Yes, this too. There's a nifty Sharing & Critiques section you could try.
ac_unit
And now I have to leave. Gotta prepare some stuff for school tomorrow.
Good luck, stay safe.
language
And now I have to leave. Gotta prepare some stuff for school tomorrow.
Good luck, stay safe.
Thank you :)
fastfood
yo why the fuck are you posting that here
Yes, this too. There's a nifty Sharing & Critiques section you could try.
thx im still learning about notebooks btw
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I'm gonna go colonize the bermuda triangle anyone wanna come with
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hi
ac_unit
Hello.
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what
fastfood
hi
hello
group
what
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Ah yes
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Is there any good reason we're celebrating every new page?
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I'm gonna go colonize the bermuda triangle anyone wanna come with
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Anywhere you go, I go!!